I'll jump into this, too, and ask how this is better??
The starting two lines are - if you are NOT in my district, and want me to listen to you, give me money, otherwise go away,
The last line is part of his freaking job.
BTW, this "correction" misses the other part of his quite begging the bankers to get involved into lobbying, of which, only a handful of congressmen are in their district- so they would be REQUIRED to pay to be listened to- and if they did, he would have listened and done something about it.
The guy is a total crook, and is swap scum.